Try Bleh, decent
I like this style in your song out of ANY of your other's, you were a little harsh on my FIRST song EVER, but, im going to be nice, I enjoy'd this, and YOU should finish the song, Its a better style than your other work, your other work would be a 2/5 and 4/10 THIS is a 4/5 and a 9/10.. I ejoyed it, especially then "Whao, whao, whao" in the end of it. If I had better programs to make music with, mine wouldnt be AS bad, Check out my submission, "Sleepless Dragon" when it uploads :]